Tuesday, 19 April 2016

Fantastic Voyage | Misuse | Pre-Viz

1 comment:

  1. Hey Danni - take another look at your text at the end, currently you've got 'Antibiotics are *slowing* becoming a thing of the past' - also, I think you should split this message up, so not cram the screen with all that info in one go. Think about dividing up the statements and progressing from the first statement to the next. And PLEASE check your spelling and grammar ALWAYS - for example *wont* needs to be written as 'won't'. This is equally true of any text in your ART OF, for example - get everything checked! Otherwise, well done on making great progress.